(x) - Humanity at its best, Fate at its worst. But Luka Lanterogue doesn't believe in destiny. Not if he can help it.
Note: Longest thing I've written since middle school. And perhaps the most bittersweet short story I've written ever. Main character is a different species than human, which is actually a more important aspect to the story than I originally thought. I wrote this on Google Docs and it was the equivalent of 25 pages. Don't read this unless you've got a good half an hour of free time.
I have it open to read tomorrow :D I'll comment afterward.
ReplyDeleteOkay! Let me know if you like it. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the concept of "The Flux" and the personalities of the main three were well done and didn't blur together. You're also very good at scenery and describing the situation. Overall, I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteYay, I'm glad you liked it! I know there are a few things that seem rushed or unexplained and I've been requested to do a prequel to expand more on Luka's back story. Hit me up if you're at all interested, too. Thanks again for the feedback! :D
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